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Striptease - A J/D fic
Hi Guys and Gals!
Striptease is a fic I wrote way back in 2006 - before I even new what a LJ was. It was written as part of a challenge and ended up turning into a 4 parter. Each part is small enough to post directly to LJ so I will post it here but behind a cut nonetheless.
Enjoy.
Title: Striptease
Author: Penthesilea
Date: 07/01/06
Series: 1 of 4 of Striptease
Rating: R
Pairings: Daniel/Jack
Category: Challenge Response, Lust
Season: Any time from Season 4 onwards
Summary: Do I really need to explain it?
Notes: This fic was written for the January 06 Challenge at Pepesplace and my first attempt at a challenge flashfic. Thanks to Saladscream for the beta and for her wonderfully inspiring manip.
Striptease is a fic I wrote way back in 2006 - before I even new what a LJ was. It was written as part of a challenge and ended up turning into a 4 parter. Each part is small enough to post directly to LJ so I will post it here but behind a cut nonetheless.
Enjoy.
Title: Striptease
Author: Penthesilea
Date: 07/01/06
Series: 1 of 4 of Striptease
Rating: R
Pairings: Daniel/Jack
Category: Challenge Response, Lust
Season: Any time from Season 4 onwards
Summary: Do I really need to explain it?
Notes: This fic was written for the January 06 Challenge at Pepesplace and my first attempt at a challenge flashfic. Thanks to Saladscream for the beta and for her wonderfully inspiring manip.
Daniel turned on his stereo and put on a 70's compilation CD. It had everything on it from 'Disco Inferno' to 'It's Raining Men'. Daniel liked to listen to this type of music when he wanted to wind down from a hard week at the mountain.
After a few drinks he really started to unwind and began swaying to the music. The music was loud and Daniel sang along, equally loud. Feeling a little tipsy from the wine, he thought he might have a little fun.
'Hot Stuff' began blaring from the stereo as Daniel began unbuttoning his shirt, hips rocking to the music. After unfastening the last button he removed his shirt, shrugging out of it, one arm after the other, before letting it fall to the floor.
Daniel continued to gyrate across his living room floor as if in another world. Closing his eyes, he began singing the words, **Looking for some hot stuff baby this evening...I want some hot stuff baby tonight...**
He continued moving as his hands began their own dance over his muscular torso. Caressing his chest and abs as if they were a lover, Daniel sighed at the sensation. Moving his hands lower, he unfastened his pants and slowly shimmied them over his firm ass cheeks. Bending over, he expertly removed them from around his ankles and slipped them out from under him.
Never missing a beat, Daniel swung his body around and opened his baby blues to a pair of wide eyes staring at him.
"Fuck!! Jack! What the hell are you doing here?" Daniel could feel his cheeks burning in embarrassment. Not waiting for an answer, Daniel quickly picked up his pants to cover is nakedness and fled.
"Daniel, wait!" Jack yelled after him.
Jack had arrived a couple of minutes earlier and after no answer to his knocking, he had let himself in with his key. What he saw when he entered was nothing short of spectacular. He'd come in at about the same time as Daniel's shirt had come off. Jack had been mesmerised as he'd looked at the perfection before him. When Daniel had started touching himself, Jack had felt his pants become all too tight.
When Daniel had dropped his pants and bent over, it was all Jack could do to hold himself back from stalking across the room and taking him right there. He might have had, too, if Daniel hadn't turned around at that moment to discover Jack staring at him.
"Oh God! What the hell was I thinking?" Daniel stood in the doorway mentally kicking himself. Daniel had forgotten that Jack was coming over for Pizza. He'd also forgotten that Jack had a key to his place.
How convenient. Not!
"Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!" became Daniel's mantra.
"Daniel?"
Daniel jumped at Jack's approach, and realising he was still naked, quickly moved into his room and put his pants back on before Jack came in.
"Daniel. Hey, why'd you run away like that? It's not like I haven't seen you naked before. Communal showers, remember?" Jack couldn't help but smirk at Daniel.
"I'm so fucking embarrassed!" Daniel wouldn't look at Jack as he sat on the edge of his bed.
Jack came to sit beside him. "Hey, don't be embarrassed. You looked pretty darn good from where I was standing." Jack smiled as Daniel lifted his head.
"You think...you think I looked good?" Daniel stuttered. Never once did he think Jack would ever see him that way.
"Yeah sure ya betcha," Jack chimed, hoping Daniel would realise that he'd finally got a ticket on the 'clue bus'.
"Are you saying...?" Daniel could only hope.
In answer, Jack moved in closer and placed a tentative kiss on Daniel's lips. Daniel pulled back in surprise before going back for more. This time the kiss was more forceful and both men moaned at the contact.
"How about an encore, Hot Stuff?" Jack asked after managing to pry himself away from Daniel's lips.
Daniel just smiled wickedly and walked out of the room, swaying his hips as he left.
"Damn tease." Jack shook his head. "He's gonna kill me."
The strains of Joe Cocker's 'You Can Leave Your Hat On' and Daniel's voice invaded his senses.
"You coming or what, Jack?" Daniel yelled over the music.
"Oh I will be soon, Danny Boy. I will be soon," Jack said as he left to enjoy the show.
After a few drinks he really started to unwind and began swaying to the music. The music was loud and Daniel sang along, equally loud. Feeling a little tipsy from the wine, he thought he might have a little fun.
'Hot Stuff' began blaring from the stereo as Daniel began unbuttoning his shirt, hips rocking to the music. After unfastening the last button he removed his shirt, shrugging out of it, one arm after the other, before letting it fall to the floor.
Daniel continued to gyrate across his living room floor as if in another world. Closing his eyes, he began singing the words, **Looking for some hot stuff baby this evening...I want some hot stuff baby tonight...**
He continued moving as his hands began their own dance over his muscular torso. Caressing his chest and abs as if they were a lover, Daniel sighed at the sensation. Moving his hands lower, he unfastened his pants and slowly shimmied them over his firm ass cheeks. Bending over, he expertly removed them from around his ankles and slipped them out from under him.
Never missing a beat, Daniel swung his body around and opened his baby blues to a pair of wide eyes staring at him.
"Fuck!! Jack! What the hell are you doing here?" Daniel could feel his cheeks burning in embarrassment. Not waiting for an answer, Daniel quickly picked up his pants to cover is nakedness and fled.
"Daniel, wait!" Jack yelled after him.
Jack had arrived a couple of minutes earlier and after no answer to his knocking, he had let himself in with his key. What he saw when he entered was nothing short of spectacular. He'd come in at about the same time as Daniel's shirt had come off. Jack had been mesmerised as he'd looked at the perfection before him. When Daniel had started touching himself, Jack had felt his pants become all too tight.
When Daniel had dropped his pants and bent over, it was all Jack could do to hold himself back from stalking across the room and taking him right there. He might have had, too, if Daniel hadn't turned around at that moment to discover Jack staring at him.
"Oh God! What the hell was I thinking?" Daniel stood in the doorway mentally kicking himself. Daniel had forgotten that Jack was coming over for Pizza. He'd also forgotten that Jack had a key to his place.
How convenient. Not!
"Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!" became Daniel's mantra.
"Daniel?"
Daniel jumped at Jack's approach, and realising he was still naked, quickly moved into his room and put his pants back on before Jack came in.
"Daniel. Hey, why'd you run away like that? It's not like I haven't seen you naked before. Communal showers, remember?" Jack couldn't help but smirk at Daniel.
"I'm so fucking embarrassed!" Daniel wouldn't look at Jack as he sat on the edge of his bed.
Jack came to sit beside him. "Hey, don't be embarrassed. You looked pretty darn good from where I was standing." Jack smiled as Daniel lifted his head.
"You think...you think I looked good?" Daniel stuttered. Never once did he think Jack would ever see him that way.
"Yeah sure ya betcha," Jack chimed, hoping Daniel would realise that he'd finally got a ticket on the 'clue bus'.
"Are you saying...?" Daniel could only hope.
In answer, Jack moved in closer and placed a tentative kiss on Daniel's lips. Daniel pulled back in surprise before going back for more. This time the kiss was more forceful and both men moaned at the contact.
"How about an encore, Hot Stuff?" Jack asked after managing to pry himself away from Daniel's lips.
Daniel just smiled wickedly and walked out of the room, swaying his hips as he left.
"Damn tease." Jack shook his head. "He's gonna kill me."
The strains of Joe Cocker's 'You Can Leave Your Hat On' and Daniel's voice invaded his senses.
"You coming or what, Jack?" Daniel yelled over the music.
"Oh I will be soon, Danny Boy. I will be soon," Jack said as he left to enjoy the show.