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evalentine99 ([personal profile] evalentine99) wrote in [personal profile] madbottoms 2012-01-14 10:21 am (UTC)

Hiya am commenting here because for some reason LJ wont let me.

Standing ovation from me this story is brilliant. The pace is excellent nothing is forced. When things happen there is feeling of rightness about it.

I loved every word and put this in my memories. You should serious rework this and tryng and sell it as a romance.

Wonderful stuff.



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