This looks so promising and you're off to a good start.
Would love to see more of this story - please!
I like the idea yanto mentioned of calling the business The Hub. One definition of Hub is: A place that forms the effective center of an activity. Slogan: "Come to the Hub for all your electronic needs!" The Hub would sell everything from washers, dryers, laptops, flat screens, to iPods and iPads.
Title could possibly be The Second Window. A launch window is the best time when a rocket or space shuttle can be launched for best results. When a rocket launch is scrubbed (cancelled) due to weather or technical problem, they have to wait for the next launch window which could be called The Second Window. Just an idea; feel free to use it or perhaps it gave you another idea for a title.
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on 2012-02-05 04:32 am (UTC)Would love to see more of this story - please!
I like the idea yanto mentioned of calling the business The Hub. One definition of Hub is: A place that forms the effective center of an activity. Slogan: "Come to the Hub for all your electronic needs!" The Hub would sell everything from washers, dryers, laptops, flat screens, to iPods and iPads.
Title could possibly be The Second Window. A launch window is the best time when a rocket or space shuttle can be launched for best results. When a rocket launch is scrubbed (cancelled) due to weather or technical problem, they have to wait for the next launch window which could be called The Second Window. Just an idea; feel free to use it or perhaps it gave you another idea for a title.
Can't wait for your next chapter!