Very interesting beginning, once again! ;-) That's what I thought, your previous story made me vaguely think of a novel "rose water" that I read long ago. I loved it.
Poor Jack: it is a bank account in the eyes of his prétendants.C is true he must be careful but this may impair their judgment. Something familiar in that smile ... They have met before, but Jack does not remember? Maybe Ianto was a pimply teenager? nan! I think not! Mary's friend ... who is this? I can not help thinking that this is Ianto ... Ianto wrote what? I'm curious to know what he did!
In a university, I think sporting equipment. So Jack may own sports stores or gyms. There is also all that is hardware. But I believe less. Unless if he has an internet cafe franchise ... and then, if Ianto make always his gorgeous coffee ... This could lead to interesting perspectives!
So, given my comments: YES I am interested by more!
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on 2012-02-04 03:59 pm (UTC)That's what I thought, your previous story made me vaguely think of a novel "rose water" that I read long ago.
I loved it.
Poor Jack: it is a bank account in the eyes of his prétendants.C is true he must be careful but this may impair their judgment.
Something familiar in that smile ... They have met before, but Jack does not remember? Maybe Ianto was a pimply teenager? nan! I think not!
Mary's friend ... who is this? I can not help thinking that this is Ianto ...
Ianto wrote what? I'm curious to know what he did!
In a university, I think sporting equipment. So Jack may own sports stores or gyms.
There is also all that is hardware. But I believe less. Unless if he has an internet cafe franchise ... and then, if Ianto make always his gorgeous coffee ... This could lead to interesting perspectives!
So, given my comments: YES I am interested by more!