When Lighting Strikes - A Brokeback LoveFest Entry

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Title:  When Lightning Strikes!

Author: Sandy (madaboutms)

Pairing: Jack/Ennis

Story Type: AU, PWP, one-shot

Warnings/Rating: NC17, m/m sexual situations.

Summary: Jack gets a flat. Ennis helps him pump it up. :o)

Word Count: 3259
Feedback: Yes please!

A/N: This is my first foray into writing in the BBM fandom and I hope I don’t disappoint. I was always a little too nervous because I didn't think I could do our boys justice and just stuck to writing in my other fandom. Thanks to my ever faithful friend, Jodi for the beta and Sienata and Lolitaray for inspiring us with their LoveFest idea. I hope I can live up to such talented company.
Disclaimer: They’re not mine. Just havin’ some fun with ‘em for a while. 

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“Son of whoreson bitch!!! As if this fuckin’ day could get any worse.” Middle of fucking nowhere in the oppressive heat and all he wanted to do was get home.  Not that he had anyone to go home to, but at least there was a comfortable chair to unwind in and a cold beer to wash away the loneliness.

 

While taking a short vacation from work, so he could enter a few rodeos, he'd read an article in the paper that the company he currently worked for had gone belly up. Just his luck. He seemed to have a bad time of it lately. The only luck he could speak of was that he’d won some prize money for a few rides, but had come off the last one and only by some miracle he had come out of it with only a few bruises. Coulda made a killin', too, damn it!

 

Jack kicked the tyre of his Ford truck and let some more curses rip after he realised he hadn’t put his steel caps on this morning and an excruciating pain shot through his foot.

 

“Jesus fuck!” He yelled and leaned against the vehicle, lifting his foot to rest on his bent knee and massaged his foot as well as he could through the brown leather boot. The pain began to subside, he could wiggle his toes and realised that it wasn’t as bad as he thought.

 

Giving his foot one last rub, he let it down and walked to the rear of the truck to get his tool kit and spare tyre. As he was removing the necessary items, he heard a truck pull up behind him.

 

Jack turned and watched a tall cool glass of water get out of the pick-up and walk toward him. Pale blue jeans, a check shirt and the sexiest mop of blonde curls. He surely was making Jack’s day look better. And Jack was positive that he could quench the craving he’d been unable to satisfy of late.

 

“Well, hey there, friend.” Jack tipped his hat at the stranger.

 

“Need a hand there, bud?” More than a hand if he got lucky.

 

“Well, that’s mighty nice of you to offer, but I think I can manage. Although I wouldn’t mind the company,” Jack boldly offered. “It sure does get lonely travelling these long flat roads.” He turned his gaze to briefly take in the surroundings, noticing storm clouds in the distance, off to the west.

 

“I guess,” was the stranger's reply, as he surreptitiously gave Jack a good up and down.

 

“Name's Jack Twist.” Jack turned back, offered a dazzling smile, as he held out his hand.

 

“Ennis.”

 

“Your folks just stop at ‘Ennis’?”

 

“del Mar.”

 

“Well, nice to know you, Ennis del Mar.”

 

As they shook hands, there was no mistaking the jolt that surged through both men. They looked at each other as if searching for something. A sign maybe. The thick air sizzled with awareness and a distant rumble of thunder caused Jack to glance away for a second. The moment passed and Ennis released his grip and stepped back slightly as if to put some distance between them.

 

“So…Mm… Just a flat then?”

 

“Looks like. Shouldn’t take too long. Thought my day was going from bad to worse when I heard the pop, but I guess it’s not too bad.” Again with the inviting smile, before he lugged the tools out of the back and crouched down to loosen the wheel nuts.

 

Ennis knew that look. He’d seen it many times but had always steered clear of entanglements like that. But there was something special about Jack that tugged at him. He’d barely known the man for five minutes, but he felt an attraction and he really didn’t think he wanted to deny himself this time.

 

Ennis watched as Jack worked the nuts loose, noticing the muscles in his back moving through the thin material. He could see droplets of sweat slowly sliding down Jack’s face and all he could think of was that he wanted to lick them off. Like he would die of thirst if he couldn’t get a taste of that sweet nectar.

 

It was a scorcher of a day out on the flat plains, the sun belting down on the hot asphalt where they were parked. The humidity was high, with not a bit of wind to be felt at all. When Jack had turned to greet Ennis, he’d felt as if the temperature had risen even more so. Now, his groin was aching and his attraction was increasing with each passing minute.

 

“Hey, Ennis, could ya get the jack and the tyre out of the back for me?” Jack grunted as he managed to get the final nut loose.

 

“Sure enough.” Ennis lugged the tyre out with a grunt and then the jack.

 

Jack couldn’t help but wonder if that’s what Ennis would sound like when he was balls deep in his ass. Oh yes, Jack had every confidence that Ennis would be his.

 

Jack was feeling the heat, too, and not just because of the weather. To make things more interesting, he unbuttoned his shirt and removed it, showing off his impressive upper body. He kept in shape, and owned a mirror, so he knew what image he presented.

 

Jack’s muscles continued to flex as he positioned the jack under the car and started pumping the lever. Ennis was transfixed on the way Jack’s body moved in motion with the sure strokes. The sweat teased him mercilessly as it now began to play along Jack’s back and shoulders, the sun reflecting nicely, making Jack’s body glisten.

 

“Hey! Pass me the spare.” No answer. “ Hey, Ennis! Where you at, man?”

 

“Mm… sorry,” Ennis shyly replied. He’d been so caught up in his lusty thoughts he hadn’t heard Jack calling him.

 

While Ennis had been daydreaming, Jack had removed the flat and had it sitting by the truck. “Wanna hand me the tyre?”

 

“Sorry,” he repeated, crimson coming to his cheeks, feeling as if Jack knew exactly what he was thinking.

 

“Well, aint that a sight!” Jack teased.

 

“Whu..?”

 

“I don’t believe I’ve seen a grown man blush quite like you.”

 

“Say what?”

 

“You’re just so damn ...hot.” Jack flirted. Was he totally off the mark? He didn’t think so. He waited for the blow up but it didn’t come.

 

“Mm…well…” Ennis spluttered.

 

“What were you thinking about there, Friend. Must a been something real good to get that blush goin.” Jack winked.

 

“Shit!” Ennis saw a bit of humour in Jack’s eyes but also awareness and knew he knew.

 

Jack didn’t want to spook him none but couldn’t help a bit of teasing. He really was irresistible when he blushed. But what Jack really wanted to see was the look on his face the moment he came. And that was gonna happen soon.

 

“I’ll get it on for ya.” Ennis managed to finally say as he wheeled the spare and lifted it in place.

 

In short order the tyre was changed and heated stares were passed between both men, leaving no room for misinterpreting what they meant.

 

“Well, thanks, Ennis. Sure glad you came along. Help me get this flat in the back?”

 

Lifting it together, they secured the tyre in the back and just stood there staring at each other, electricity gathering between them till they thought they would burst. It was a test of wills, man versus man, as well as man versus nature. The storm clouds rolled in, a slight breeze with them, bringing some relief to the overheated men, but also the threat of rain.

 

Ennis looked around searching for any sign of intrusion and when he felt satisfied they were completely alone, he grabbed Jack and pulled him to the other side of the truck and rammed him forcefully into it, crushing both his hips and mouth against him and kissed the shit out of him.

 

Muffled groans could be heard as bodies writhed against each other and breaths were stolen as they each tried to slake their thirst for one another. Their need for each other rivalled the earth's need for moisture. And it seemed their passion won.

 

Only the need for oxygen finally unglued their mouths and gulps of breath were taken.

 

“Fuck, you’re an animal, Ennis! I can’t wait to hear you growl.” Jack panted before diving in for another hard kiss, reversing their positions and grabbing hold of Ennis’ taut ass. “Oh fuck, yeah, you’re so fine.”

 

“Jack…fuck…I’m gonna come.” Ennis moaned as Jack continued to grind against him and squeeze his rear.

 

“Oh, no you don’t. Not till you’re buried inside me, Friend. You got that?”

 

Jack pulled Ennis away from the side of the vehicle and opened the back door, pushing Ennis in and climbing up after him. Pulling the door shut firmly, Jack straddled Ennis and rubbed his ass on Ennis’ groin, smiling at how hard he was. The sensation, even through his denim jeans was unmistakably arousing and he really needed to get out of them. He needed to feel naked skin.

 

Jack was glad his truck was a double cab, with full back seat and roomy interior. It meant they had room to move and not have to worry about being cramped up, spoiling the fun.

 

“Come on, Ennis, get naked. I wanna feel your body against mine and I need that cock of yours inside me.”

 

By the time Ennis had his shirt off, Jack had unbuckled his jeans for him and roughly ripped them down around his ankles before stopping. “Fuckin boots! Shit.”

 

“Forget ‘em Jack, jus' get yours off will ya! I’m fuckin dying here.”

 

“Well, fuck me, that’s impressive,” exclaimed Jack appreciatively. “I gotta have me some of that.”

 

“Yer gonna, but not afore that ass of yours is naked and ya mount up.”

 

“Alright there, Cowboy. I’m gonna ride ya like I do my bulls back in Texas. But first I just need a taste of you.”

 

Jack managed to strip his pants off, his cock standing proud, dripping pearly liquid. He leaned down and licked the tip of Ennis’ dick, savouring the flavour. “Damn, you taste good. I could just eat you up right but I’d rather have you in my ass right now. Let me just slick you up a bit first.”

 

Not having anything else to ease the way in, Jack let his mouth run over Ennis’ hard piece of flesh and his spit helped lube it.

 

Ennis moaned and lifted his hips in reaction, almost choking Jack with his hard dick. “Ah, fuck…. Stop or your ass is gonna miss out. Now saddle up!”

 

“Well then get ready, ‘cause here I come.” Jack mounted his cowboy and slowly lowered himself on the monstrosity that was Ennis’ manhood and moaned as the slow burn overtook his senses. "Ah…ah…fuck  ah you’re fucking huge Ennis, feels like you’re splitting me in two ... but damn that’s good. Yeah!”

 

Ennis could only moan as his face contorted with pleasure, the feel of Jack’s tight hole squeezing his cock as it slid down with aching slowness. He let Jack set the pace, because he knew how big he was and didn’t want to hurt him. So he breathed deep and exhaled. He stared into the blue eyes above him and got lost in their depth as Jack made his final descent, his ass touching down and Ennis snugged all the way in.

 

“Damn, but you’re beautiful.” Ennis startled himself with his words, never being one to sprout words of romance. He wasn’t about hearts and flowers, even when he was married. That just wasn’t him. But something about this man made him want to say these things. “I could get lost in yours eyes.”

 

“Are you blushing again, Ennis? I love that I have that effect on you.” Jack touched Ennis’ cheek and watched him blush brighter. “God, that’s so sexy.”

 

“Mm…”

 

“Are you ready for it, Ennis? I’m gonna ride you so good, Cowboy.” Jack swivelled his hips a few times before raising his ass up, squeezing his muscles and pushing back down hard. Jack liked it hard and deep, and with that need foremost in his mind, he pumped his ass up and down on Ennis’s cock, feeling it brush deep into him.

 

Jack pumped up and down a few times, loosening himself up for the wild ride he knew was coming and somehow just knew that this was going to be the best fuck of his life. Swivelling his hips a few more times, Jack leaned forward and brushed his lips across Ennis’s before burying his face in the warm neck and marking his lover, his teeth leaving red marks and saliva in their wake.

 

“Okay, your turn to work, Ennis. Fuck me hard and don’t stop. Keep fucking until we die.” Jack remained leaning over Ennis as his lover’s cock moved within him, his own dick bouncing between them and aching to be touched. He rose up and sat back down roughly on his lover, fucking himself hard and fast. “Come on, Cowboy, show me what you got!”

 

And then like being thrown out of the bull pen, Ennis bucked up and the ride really began. Jack rode him with all his skill and might, moving with his mount in synchronised movements. Ennis was a fuckin’ wild animal to be sure, one which Jack hoped would never be tamed but still come to him when he called.

 

The sounds coming from Ennis were like a huffing bull and his nostrils flared as he pumped wildly into Jack. It was inspiring to know he did this; that he could make another human being act like this. Never before had he gotten this reaction from anyone. Seeing this and listening to Ennis in the throes of ecstasy was like hearing the roars from crowded stadium, cheering him on to last that eight seconds and win his prize. He was going for the fuckin’ championship and it was within his reach.

 

The approaching storm brought with it rolling thunder, occasional flashes of lightning, and only added to the sounds the men were making. It seemed to heighten their sensations, making them shudder with reaction. Soft raindrops began to fall, slowly picking up speed and tempo with every passing second.

 

 Jack was on fire and he trembled as his body was assaulted with pure pleasure. Ennis seemed to have a talent for hitting that magic spot on almost every thrust, Jack experiencing mini orgasms throughout the battering.

 

He could deny his own cock no longer and fisted the swollen flesh as he pumped hard, Ennis' hand joining in, wrapped around his own. After a few short, hard strokes, ribbons of semen spurted out and splattered over their hands and Ennis’ stomach. He watched as Jack’s face twisted in ecstasy as he shouted out his climax. “Oh fuck, oh fuck, OH YEEEEESSSS!!!!!”

 

The sky broke loose, pelting rain, and bright flashes of lightning filled the truck's cab, illuminating the scene within. And it was that moment that froze itself in Ennis' mind, like a snapshot, never to be forgotten.

 

Ennis thought he was absolutely beautiful. And seeing the effect he had on his new lover, came with a feral growl, arching up and almost bucking Jack off him in the process. Ennis felt Jack clench his ass muscles around his cock tighter, squeezing it all out of him. He pumped a few more times, making sure he got it all out and let his ass drop back to the seat. Ennis was glad he was on his back, otherwise he would have collapsed onto Jack in an exhausted and heap most likely suffocate the poor man.

 

Jack let his own wrung out body fall into a heap on top of Ennis, sliding over his own release. “Oh fuck, Ennis. I think I’m gonna have to have your cock all the time. I’m ruined now. I loved having you pulsing inside me. It feels so good having you fill me up.”

 

Jack was, of course, no stranger to having a hard cock shoved up his ass, but never had he come so hard or actually felt something akin to what he was feeling at this moment.  He knew somehow that Ennis had already become an addiction and he would never be able to get enough now. He could only hope Ennis would want to see him again.

 

As the euphoria of their coupling subsided, so did the storm outside that had so spectacularly mimicked their actions inside. It seemed that thirsts had been quenched and the rumble of the thunder was moving away, taking the worst of the rain with it until all that could be heard was a light patter of raindrops of the cab roof.

 

Jack lifted his ass off Ennis’s groin, feeling the silky substance trickle out, and laid down over Ennis, nuzzling his neck once again, soaking up the musky after-sex scent and taking a swipe with his tongue.

 

“I wanna see you again, Ennis,” Jack mumbled into his neck.

 

“Whut?”

 
            

Jack lifted his head and kissed Ennis softly, then pulled back to look at him. “I want to see you again. I don’t know what it is, Friend, but you’ve done something to me. I need to have more of you. I know you want to, Cowboy. I can feel your answer already.” He looked confidently into the brown eyes of the man he knew was going to be his lover and rubbed his groin into Ennis’.

 

“You’re pretty cocky there, aint ya, Rodeo?” Ennis smiled, as he lifted his body to meet Jack’s.

 

“I sure am.” He kissed Ennis again and it soon turned into something more passionate and arousals were definitely on the rise again.

 

Suddenly mindful of their location, Ennis pulled away. “Jack, bud, we gotta take this somewhere else.”

 

“What? Where?”

 

“My place is just down the road. Why don’t ya follow me?”

 

“Does this mean ‘yes’, Ennis?” Jack’s heart beat faster and he smiled because he already knew the answer. He had him.

 

They quickly got themselves in order and exited the rear of the truck, the light sprinkling of rain leaving droplets on their flushed faces. Jack lifted his face to the sky momentarily, enjoying the coolness of the rain on his skin before focusing back on Ennis who was staring at him with an openness that excited Jack.

 

“So, we gonna fuck again as soon as we get to your place, Cowboy?” Jack pinched his ass and grinned lasciviously. “’Cause I already feel the need and if we don’t hurry up, I’m gonna rip those jeans off ya again, right this minute, swallow you whole, and show ya just why you said ‘yes’.”

 

“Jesus fuck!” Ennis shifted and had to grab his sac and squeeze to stop himself from coming in his pants. “You just control yourself there, Rodeo. Get in ya damn truck and just follow me.”

 

Ennis walked to his own vehicle mumbling, “Jack fuckin’ Twist.”

 

“What was that?” Jack asked as he opened his door.

 

“You gonna fuckin drive me crazy, I just know it.”

 

“Yeah, but I’m also gonna make you so happy...and hot that you’ll never wanna let me go, Friend. You think you can handle me?

 

Ennis looked at him and grinned and said “You bet!” then got in his truck and pulled out.

 

Jack whooped happily, got in his truck and followed his future.

 

 

~end~