ext_229923 ([identity profile] carmenmariabs.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] madbottoms 2008-04-26 03:57 pm (UTC)

I think that in this way to "normality", the two are committing unintentional errors.

Ennis is being too complacent, too quiet, too patient, it does not help in the long run, perhaps a small leak of anger, their feelings would be more natural.
By jack is unconsciously moving away from Ennis ... this may lead to falling into the arms of others

Both need to demonstrate what they feel, what is right and wrong, what they produce satisfaction and anger.
Thank you for your story.
Carmen

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