on 2008-05-16 09:31 pm (UTC)
Posted by (Anonymous)
Oh god, just heart breaking. Jack crawling to the head of the bed, Ennis unable to fathom what he has done wrong. Pain and so much confusion on how they deal with this sort of situation.

I had a feeling that Jack was going through a difficult time but this is so hard to read. He is so damaged from him time in Jail, Ennis really does need to tread carefully. It's time for Jack to give him something to work with though, not sexually but emotionally. They are meant to be together, in sickness and in health. Its time for walls to be torn down and for stronger ones to be rebuilt in there place.

Thank you for this truly captivating update. You write with vision and depth. Love it.

Joanne Xx
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